Post It Note Poetry February 11

February 11 – Vision

Post It Note Poetry Feb 11

Shifting the weight of the pack and

Shining a torch at the ground

To light the path at my feet

At first there are rough stones

Then a footpath, a road, a highway

To live without vision

Is to perish in the darkness

I will build a lighthouse

And guide you home

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One response to “Post It Note Poetry February 11

  1. Two favourite lines are:

    “I will build a lighthouse
    And guide you home”

    I’d love to see you take up the challenge to rework this as a tanka poem because of the two distinct but connected ideas running through it. And I’d love to see you take up the challenge to write something small!

    http://www.tankaonline.com/Quick%20Start%20Guide.htm

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